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Whispers and screams woke me from a dream
Seeing the dead was a surprise indeed
Looking aghast , No ! I cried is it time ?
We've come to take you to your tomb
death came while you were asleep
Cold decaying hands led me inside
Those long dead rose with pride
Taking my place next to a girl without a face
Melancholy filled the air as I looked around in despair
Then that voice came clear telling me why I'm there
There's nothing to fear after all we're all dead in here .
I wrote this one a few years ago after I was going through some rough times , writing really helps :) thanks to all who faves it .
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Patty I think that you and my husband would had got along very well and think also that he would had loved your work as it is always on the dark side .This is very good my friend and creepy.I think that you really should had joined some poem groups and got  some recognition for these writings.
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh heh maybe :) thanks dear friend ^_^ I was thinking about joining a group but decided not to . I had another good one but I think da had removed it :(
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
That is too bad Patty sometimes people just let go of groups and don't care about it as they do not have the time like they used to.
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah I know besides way too many groups as is .
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analovecatdog Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
excellent patty. i know how you feel. writing and art is great theraphy
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ana , you're right especially when I'm going through some emotional times :)
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Silberstreif1905 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
:stare: :omg: :faint:
wow
only wow
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks very much :)
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Silberstreif1905 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
i dont have words...
I'm totally speechless...
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wow...
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww , you're too kind . Wished more people would like it .
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